Ollie's Logo

From the suggestions we gave Ollie, he has gone and made improvements to the logo he created. As you can see below is the new logo.



After looking at it, I cant really see how he has made the suggestions that we made. The writing is in a bad colour because it doesnt stand out againest the background. The colours are too brigtht and dont match. I will show Connor this logo and see if he agrees with me or not, then we will discuss changes with Ollie.